Commentary: Panel 1: Okay, so I decided to try a whole lot of new stuff on this page including: new line width on both characters and speech bubbles, new colouring style, new background, and a new style of background. i'm not sure how keen I am on the way the background looks here as when I save it to go up here, it lowers the quality and the background doesn't look as nice. Which is... lame. I will find ways around it unless nobody really cares. Panel 2: Zi is so grouchy : D Panel 3: K, not to self, add more definite lines to the background so Zi's tail doesn't look like it's floating... Panel 4: Oh, Tal, Zi just has a stick up his bum... Panel 5: I like the way Patrick turned out in this panel. Which is good cuz the sketch in the storyboard looks terrible XD