Commentary:
Panel 1: I don't know why it entertains me to have a god scratching his ear with his foot.... is it just me?
Panel 2: I'm beginning to have a strong distaste for Tal... Maybe that's why he doesn't talk much in the next chapter. -shrugs- oh well.
Panel 3: Whoot, I love Djin. Except when I'm scripting and he won't shut up. When I scripted this page I had no idea what Djin was going to say so I just let him talk and found out that Tal has an older brother. wow, eh?
Panel 4: oooh, transition-y
Panel 5: Ha ha, nice try Tal. You're awake now. Anyway... he originally had another line in this panel that said "Ow, my tongue!" but I didn't think it was that funny or that it fit very well.
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