Commentary: Panel 1: I kinda of dislike this whole page. I was pretty depressed and overwhelmed with stress and things I needed (and still need) to get done. So... I didn't exactly put as much into this one as I normally do. Anyway, Tal looks fat in this panel. Panel 2: Corrigan's neck is too long and his eyes are weird. Panel 3: Whoo, Corrigan looks good here. Gods I love that little bugger. Panel 4: More Corrigan goodness. And Sena's bottom. Panel 5: This looked better in my head... Blah, I was considering taking this page out but it serves as a time transition and gives sort of a definition of Tara, which will become more important as we move along.